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Haiku Chain

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Use the last line of the preceding haiku as the first line of yours.

 

The structure is three lines:

 

5 syllables

7 syllables

5 syllables

 

Here goes...

 

I toss the pebble

Ripples distort the surface

Flowing back to self

 

:D

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The Stars Seem So Far

Invard, or is it Outward

At this moment, look

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At this moment, look

The light of day fills the world

What is hidden still

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What is hidden still?

Only what you choose not to see.

Openness transcends!

 

doh! ya beat me taomeow :)

 

the innermost yin

too much yang will obscure it

feeling, not thinking

 

:D

Edited by joeblast

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Feeling, not thinking

I tread beneath the moonlight

Making my way home

 

Making my way home

or making the Way my home--

who could oppose that?..

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Making my way home

or making the Way my home--

who could oppose that?..

 

bloody nose

stupid grin

one step one trip

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current sweeps me on

like the tide

Circles and spirials

Edited by Wun Yuen Gong

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Circles and spirals

Movement and stillness combined

Where does it all start

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current sweeps me on

like the tide

Circles and spirials

 

Circles and spirals

Sun sets moon rises seasons change

Retreat to return

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around in circles

faster and faster until

it all fades away

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it all fades away

my face dissolves into sand

waves wash over me

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navigate by stars

rotation of the universe

heavenly horses change directions

:unsure::)

 

First five syllables

Seven syllables is next

Five to round it off

 

;)

 

Heavenly horses

Change direction, turn the wheel

We hear the echoes

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