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9 minutes ago, Taomeow said:

 

I care for others,

I don't care for still others --

like the falling rain.  

 

like the falling rain

I plink, pour, puddle, and plop

Leia´s sweet revenge.

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1 hour ago, liminal_luke said:

 

like the falling rain

I plink, pour, puddle, and plop

Leia´s sweet revenge.

 

Interesting bilingual play of words for me.  Lei is, incidentally, the Russian for "pour" in the imperative mood.  Leika -- a watering can, and also the diminutive of Leia.  Lei-ka -- same as lei but the imperative mood is expressed more informally.  

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18 minutes ago, BigSkyDiamond said:

and marzipan scones

under sapphire skies, trees creak,

mint breeze enfolds me

 

Mint breeze enfolds me.

Don't know about the people,

but scarecrows look cool.  

 

(with a nod to Kobayashi Issa's late Edo period classic:

"Approaching my village:

Don't know about the people,

but all the scarecrows are crooked.")

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4 hours ago, Taomeow said:

 

Mint breeze enfolds me.

Don't know about the people,

but scarecrows look cool.  

 

 

 

but scarecrows look cool

out in the fields, standing watch

wrists, very empty

 

("standing at the side road, listening to the billboard knock

well, my wrist was empty, but my nerves were kickin', tickin' like a clock"--

Black Crow Blues, by Bob Dylan

"black crows in the meadow, cross the broad highway; well it might sound funny, but I don't feel much like a scarecrow today")

 

 

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1 hour ago, Mark Foote said:

 

 

but scarecrows look cool

out in the fields, standing watch

wrists, very empty

 

("standing at the side road, listening to the billboard knock

well, my wrist was empty, but my nerves were kickin', tickin' like a clock"--

Black Crow Blues, by Bob Dylan

"black crows in the meadow, cross the broad highway; well it might sound funny, but I don't feel much like a scarecrow today")

 

 


wrists, very empty

the crack between bones so dark

that it always shines.

 

 

 

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On 09/06/2025 at 11:27 AM, BigSkyDiamond said:

that it always shines,

nickle on the dirt road, a

diamond in the dust


diamond in the dust

dirt distinguished from carbon

is carbon as well.

 

 

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21 hours ago, Apech said:


diamond in the dust

dirt distinguished from carbon

is carbon as well.

 

 

 

is carbon as well

as can be today, or not?

that is the question

 

that is the question

whether 'tis nobler, all that...

pickled carbon, yum

 

pickled carbon, yum

down at the lake, algae blooms

ducks glide by in pairs

ok, only one duck here, not exactly gliding:

 

250512-duck-rides-the-storm_DSC02771.jpg

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16 hours ago, Mark Foote said:

pickled carbon, yum

down at the lake, algae blooms

ducks glide by in pairs

 

ducks glide by in pairs

still lake blends seamless with sky 

islands float in air

 

IMG_20250610_213104_HDR.jpg.bffdbb95babedb3b293f7d0e99ea5964.jpg

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3 hours ago, Mark Foote said:

 

250512-duck-rides-the-storm_DSC02771.jpg

 

i am mesmerized by this image. 

sorry for interrupting the flow of the thread

 

i can't look away,

Mark's photo mesmerizes.

van gogh starry night.

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On 6/11/2025 at 5:47 PM, BigSkyDiamond said:


islands float in air,

astonished eyes shine and smile

enthusiasm
 

 

 

enthusiasm

for Van Gogh's starry night is

an understatement

 

an understatement

the gratitude we all have

one day at a time

 

 

 

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17 hours ago, Mark Foote said:

 

 

enthusiasm

for Van Gogh's starry night is

an understatement

 

an understatement

the gratitude we all have

one day at a time

 

 

 


One day at a time

when there was no time at all

just before before.

 

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1 hour ago, Apech said:


One day at a time

when there was no time at all

just before before.

 

 

just before before

the instant of creation

singularity?

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