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i miss you so much.

 

why do we have to do this?

 

please let us stay friends.

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not a bad idea

stream of hikonschious writing

rippling echoes

 

malleable words

can say all that needs to be said

in seventeen beats

 

i have to report you to the haiku police :lol: sorry!

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You are hereby charged;
Harmonious Emptiness:
With too many beats.



not a bad idea (idea 2 or 3? I'd'ya 2 eye'dee'ah 3) [A good idea:]

stream of hikonschious writing {willing to overlook: highconscious or haikonscious}

rippling echoes (dont care myself, i say its 3: ripple-ing, but it could be rip'pling) (adding a single syllable word does it justice with ease)

 

malleable words

can say all that needs to be said (8)

in seventeen beats

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Seeking for the truth,

Out of emptiness it comes,

closed eyes, see the light.



Panoramic sight,

In emptiness spawns the light,

Eyes wide closed, good night.

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***

Shema Yisrael

Adonai Eloheinu

Adonai Eḥad

 

 

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O say can you see,
by the dawn's early light, what
so proudly we hailed...

 

 

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God save our gracious

Queen, live long our noble Queen,

God save the Queen! Riff!

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