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On 11/2/2019 at 1:37 AM, Earl Grey said:

“Dafug? Captain Hook?!"

Watch the Disney movie and

shake your head smiling.


Shake your head smiling:

Jolly Roger’s sailing while

Tinkerbell’s sparkling

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4 hours ago, Earl Grey said:


Shake your head smiling:

Jolly Roger’s sailing while

Tinkerbell’s sparkling


Tinkerbell’s sparkling,

from a body light as air,

pure biophotons.

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On 11/8/2019 at 12:21 AM, Nintendao said:


Tinkerbell’s sparkling,

from a body light as air,

pure biophotons.


pure biophotons

fancy science or magic

of reality?

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22 hours ago, Earl Grey said:


pure biophotons

fancy science or magic

of reality?

 

of reality?

who really knows how they work,

those fucking magnets?

 

Spoiler

^_^ i cant resist!

Spoiler

 

 

 

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4 minutes ago, Nintendao said:

 

of reality?

who really knows how they work,

those fucking magnets?

 

  Hide contents

^_^ i cant resist!

  Hide contents

 

 

 


those fucking magnets

draw us to one another

groove is in the heart

 

Spoiler

 

i couldn’t ask for another

 

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17 hours ago, Earl Grey said:


those fucking magnets

draw us to one another

groove is in the heart

 

  Reveal hidden contents

 

i couldn’t ask for another

 

 

 

groove is in the heart

bon-bons in the hair salon

launching ships have sailed

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2 hours ago, ऋषि said:

 

 

groove is in the heart

bon-bons in the hair salon

launching ships have sailed


launching ships have sailed

longer boats coming to win

hold on to the shore

 

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14 minutes ago, Nintendao said:


launching ships have sailed

longer boats coming to win

hold on to the shore

 


hold onto the shore,

beware the sirens call, but

find your flow, sailor

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11 minutes ago, Earl Grey said:


hold onto the shore,

beware the sirens call, but

find your flow, sailor


find your flow, sailor 

unite and set sail into

an ocean of stars

 

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16 minutes ago, Nintendao said:


find your flow, sailor 

unite and set sail into

an ocean of stars

 

An ocean of stars

champagne supernova, dance

atop meteors

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On 11/17/2019 at 7:56 AM, Earl Grey said:

An ocean of stars

champagne supernova, dance

atop meteors

 

atop meteors
young gods waltzed elegantly
a long time ago

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5 hours ago, Nintendao said:

 

atop meteors
young gods waltzed elegantly
a long time ago

A long time ago

in a galaxy, far, far 

away...STAR WARS!!!! ....yes...:D

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On 11/23/2019 at 11:44 AM, Jim D. said:

"Pampas grass in the vase

Aglow with the setting sun

As if in the open field"

 

As if in the open field

with clay statues at play with

only two by fours 

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On 11/19/2019 at 9:44 AM, Earl Grey said:

A long time ago

in a galaxy, far, far 

away...STAR WARS!!!! ....yes...:D


“away star wars yes?!”

I didn’t break the chain but

I did stump you all!

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Just now, Earl Grey said:


“away star wars yes?!”

I didn’t break the chain but

I did stump you all!

 

On 11/24/2019 at 12:44 AM, Jim D. said:

"Pampas grass in the vase

Aglow with the setting sun

As if in the open field"

I did stump you all

oh look! someone left a note:

Pampas grass in the vase

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On 11/24/2019 at 12:44 AM, Jim D. said:

"Pampas grass in the vase

Aglow with the setting sun

As if in the open field"

 

17 minutes ago, ऋषि said:

 

As if in the open field

with clay statues at play with

only two by fours 


only two by fours

were the measurement of a

master builder’s work

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5 hours ago, Earl Grey said:

 


only two by fours

were the measurement of a

master builder’s work

 

master builder’s work

respectfully repaired chain

and the beat goes on

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"The depths of Shiga--

A field of wildflowers

Borders the clouds"

 

Hosomi Ayako (1930 -1946 pg. 86/Autumn)

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On 11/28/2019 at 11:50 PM, Nintendao said:

 

master builder’s work

respectfully repaired chain

and the beat goes on

 

And the beat goes on

please keep the chain going, friend

don't start something new

 

Don't start something new:

read the rules, don't quote lines like

"the depths of Shiga--"

 

1 hour ago, Jim D. said:

"The depths of Shiga--

A field of wildflowers

Borders the clouds"

 

Hosomi Ayako (1930 -1946 pg. 86/Autumn)

 

 

Jim, please re-read the rules of the chain in the first post: 

Use the last line of the preceding haiku as the first line of yours.

 

Otherwise, if you just want to quote haiku, go here: 

 

 

Continuing with our regular scheduled haiku...

 

Borders the clouds

the fleeting notion here of

a thing called order

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3 minutes ago, Earl Grey said:

Borders the clouds

the fleeting notion here of

a thing called order

 

a thing called order

simple to define, but hard

to follow sometimes

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The structure is three lines:

 

5 syllables

7 syllables

5 syllables

 

38 minutes ago, Jim D. said:

But hard to follow sometimes

Easy to adjust

Feels good to fall in line


feels good to fall in,

a little creative work

brings all together

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1 hour ago, Earl Grey said:

The structure is three lines:

 

5 syllables

7 syllables

5 syllables

 


feels good to fall in,

a little creative work

brings all together

 

1 hour ago, Jim D. said:

Does it have to make sense. Syllables are hard for me to understand. 


brings all together 

accents vary amongst us

do your best, have fun

 

Edited by Earl Grey

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