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3 hours ago, Mark Foote said:

 

compassion is all

in four directions, up, down

like a boomerang

 

Like a boomerang

Or a dog to vomit I

Return to folly

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8 hours ago, Chang said:

 

Like a boomerang

Or a dog to vomit I

Return to folly

 

return to folly

like the birds to the berries,

fermented past sweet

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4 hours ago, Mark Foote said:

 

return to folly

like the birds to the berries,

fermented past sweet

 

Fermented past sweet

Stop when the work has been done

Enough is enough.

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On 2/7/2019 at 5:18 PM, Chang said:

 

Fermented past sweet

Stop when the work has been done

Enough is enough.

 

Enough is enough

Appetite satiated

I am still hungry

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On 2/12/2019 at 6:35 AM, steve said:

 

Enough is enough

Appetite satiated

I am still hungry

 

I am still hungry

though the cheeseburger is gone.

Where are you my love?

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4 hours ago, liminal_luke said:

 

I am still hungry

though the cheeseburger is gone.

Where are you my love?

Where are you my love?

Hot, golden, salted french fries

Spicy ketchup too

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On 2/15/2019 at 5:28 PM, Kar3n said:

Where are you my love?

Hot, golden, salted french fries

Spicy ketchup too

 

Spicy ketchup too

I'm gonna enjoy this egg

Like sunset, lakeside

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16 minutes ago, maheosphet said:

Like sunset, lakeside;

Come with me and take a ride,

Into the unknown.

 

 

Into the unknown

Man is born with each sunrise

And writes his story

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9 minutes ago, Chang said:

 

Into the unknown

Man is born with each sunrise

And writes his story

 

And writes his story,

So through the use of a man,

Something more than man.

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1 minute ago, maheosphet said:

 

And writes his story,

So through the use of a man,

Something more than man.

 

Something more than man

But not quite the Superman

Just work in progress

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8 minutes ago, Chang said:

 

Something more than man

But not quite the Superman

Just work in progress

 

Just work in progress,

Dreams in dreams and blissful rest,

In dreams I can fly.

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13 minutes ago, maheosphet said:

 

Just work in progress,

Dreams in dreams and blissful rest,

In dreams I can fly.

 

In dreams I can fly

Just like a bird in the sky

But dawn steals my wings.

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1 minute ago, Chang said:

 

In dreams I can fly

Just like a bird in the sky

But dawn steals my wings.

 

But dawn steals my wings,

Yet the memories remain,

Fading in today.

 

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28 minutes ago, maheosphet said:

 

But dawn steals my wings,

Yet the memories remain,

Fading in today.

 

 

Fading in today

And fading out tomorrow

An ill dream oft told

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13 minutes ago, Chang said:

 

Fading in today

And fading out tomorrow

An ill dream oft told

 

An ill dream oft told,

Falling from the greatest height,

Feel the vertigo.

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5 minutes ago, maheosphet said:

 

An ill dream oft told,

Falling from the greatest height,

Feel the vertigo.

 

Feel the vertigo

Yet remain in the centre

Of the turning world.

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18 minutes ago, Chang said:

 

Feel the vertigo

Yet remain in the centre

Of the turning world.

 

Of the turning world,

Worldly is as worldly does,

Manifestation.

 

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2 minutes ago, maheosphet said:

 

Of the turning world,

Worldly is as worldly does,

Manifestation.

 

 

Manifestation

First thought, followed by action

It is not magic

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5 minutes ago, Chang said:

 

Manifestation

First thought, followed by action

It is not magic

It is not magic

though it might seem so

I call it eyes wide open

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5 minutes ago, Chang said:

 

Manifestation

First thought, followed by action

It is not magic

 

It is not magic,

Observational collapse,

Particle or wave?

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2 minutes ago, thelerner said:

It is not magic

though it might seem so

I call it eyes wide open

 

I call it eyes wide open

Yet still I fall in the hole

In my waking dream

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20 minutes ago, Chang said:

 

I call it eyes wide open

Yet still I fall in the hole

In my waking dream

 

23 minutes ago, thelerner said:

It is not magic

though it might seem so

I call it eyes wide open

 

Are these haiku?

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3 minutes ago, maheosphet said:

 

 

Are these haiku?

 

It should be a 5 - 7 - 5 cadence so you have us dead to rights:ph34r: This would be better

 

With eyes wide open

I still fall into the hole

In my waking dream

 

It is not magic

Though it might seem so to be

Call it eyes open.

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