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Bob's Big Boy

drops into snake creeps down

finding only tao?

Ahh?

I think my accent/lack of one

makes me count differently!

Sorry about that! :rolleyes:

 

Peace!

 

Shon

 

Finding only Tao

 

the pond becomes clear

 

in stillness inside

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The first line is 5 syllable's

The second line is 7

The third is 5

Otherwise it ain't Hiku

 

If not sure you can check a word in the dictionary

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The first line is 5 syllable's

The second line is 7

The third is 5

Otherwise it ain't Hiku

 

If not sure you can check a word in the dictionary

 

NOooo? ... that don't work??? :unsure:

 

that's 8,7,4 and an extra line with 7, so silly ; )

 

first line is five beats

second line is seven beats

third line five. Hiku?

 

:D could be wrong.

 

Whops, forgot should pick up last line!

 

>Finding only Tao

>the pond becomes clear

>in stillness inside

 

 

In stillness inside

with any question you wish

just settle and sit

 

 

Thanks Myth!

 

:D

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The first line is 5 syllable's

The second line is 7

The third is 5

Otherwise it ain't Hiku

 

If not sure you can check a word in the dictionary

 

You mean Haiku?

 

I prefer Haiku-ish. ;)

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I prefer Haiku-ish. ;)

 

I do Haiku-ish

It can rhyme- if I wish-ish

Don't like it? Go fish

 

:)

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I do Haiku-ish

It can rhyme- if I wish-ish

Don't like it? Go fish

 

:)

 

 

Don't like it, Go fish!

in the creek that's mountain fed.

under deep blue skies!

 

 

 

 

 

edited because ~ I Can't spell :D

Edited by shontonga

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Don't like it, Go fish!

in the creek that's mountain fed.

under deep blue skies!

edited because ~ I Can't spell :D

Under deep blue skies

the sounds of Stones' Paint It Black

materialize

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Under deep blue skies

the sounds of Stones' Paint It Black

materialize

 

 

Mater realize

I cannot spell reborn like

a tender babe

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Mater realize

I cannot spell reborn like

a tender babe

 

a tender baby

open now to all that is.

How bright the stars shine!

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a tender baby

open now to all that is.

How bright the stars shine!

 

 

How bright the stars are

 

Does fame build Intelligence?

 

Don't believe your press!

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How bright the stars are

 

Does fame build Intelligence?

 

Don't believe your press!

 

Don't believe Your press!?!

Fix Those feet ... and now roll back !

Into single whip.

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Into single whip

Movement ends, body stands firm

Spring rain falls, roots sprout

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Into single whip

Movement ends, body stands firm

Spring rain falls, roots sprout

 

 

Spring rain falls, roots sprout

Leathery leaves open wide

to play in the wind

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Spring rain falls, roots sprout

Leathery leaves open wide

to play in the wind

 

To play in the wind

Sailors sniff the breeze for land

Lubbers fly their kites

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To play in the wind

Sailors sniff the breeze for land

Lubbers fly their kites

 

Lubbers fly their kites

While they picnic by the shore

Wet feet happy smiles

Edited by mgd

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Wet feet happy smiles

Joy found jumping in puddles

Rainbow coloured sky

 

 

Rainbow colored sky!

 

It was sky blue this morning...

 

Did I drop some acid?

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Rainbow colored sky!

 

It was sky blue this morning...

 

Did I drop some acid?

 

Did i drop some acid?

Is that why your Glowing! WOW.

Living lights in Blue!

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Did i drop some acid?

Is that why your Glowing! WOW.

Living lights in Blue!

 

 

Living lights in blue

Miles Davis kinda blue

Like Muddy Waters

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Like muddy waters

Is the mind that grasps at gain

Golden Body craze

 

Golden body craze

Solved by this my silver mind

A hoard of nothing

Edited by apepch7

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Golden body craze

Solved by this my silver mind

A hoard of nothing

 

A hoard of nothing

BuffaLow buff a high ho

Where did Santa go?

Edited by rain

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A hoard of nothing

BuffaLow buff a high ho

Where did Santa go?

Where did Santa go?

How to transport tons of toys

Without a worm-hole...

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Where did Santa go?

How to transport tons of toys

Without a worm-hole...

 

Without a worm-whole

this apple is less than fine!

Look! The other half. :P

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Without a worm-whole

this apple is less than fine!

Look! The other half. :P

 

Look! The other half

Yin and Yang in unity

The universe rests

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