Taomeow Posted November 21, 2013 says it's name: Kerplunk! That's a tough line to follow When casting my line I know, sorry about that -- I usually think of the next person to pick the last line -- but I had to go with it because that one was IMO my best haiku so far. Â Â When casting my line, I hope the whale will notice, panic when he does. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lemon_Squeezy Posted November 21, 2013 Panic when he does Go manic and when the gloves Fly off a lemon Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
C T Posted November 21, 2013 Panic when he does Go manic and when the gloves Fly off a lemon fly off a lemon a certain kind of yellow mellow to the eyes... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mark Foote Posted November 21, 2013 fly off a lemon a certain kind of yellow mellow to the eyes... Â mellow to the eyes clouds over the cliffs in sun sparkles on the sea 2 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
C T Posted November 24, 2013 mellow to the eyes clouds over the cliffs in sun sparkles on the sea sparkles on the sea broken sea-shells on the shore a lone sea-gull flies... 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mark Foote Posted November 25, 2013 (edited) sparkles on the sea broken sea-shells on the shore a lone sea-gull flies...  a lone seagull flies past the pelicans roosting forty to a rock  (at Natural Bridges State Park, Santa Cruz) Edited November 25, 2013 by Mark Foote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
TAXICAT Posted November 25, 2013 a lone seagull flies past the pelicans roosting forty to a rock  (at Natural Bridges State Park, Santa Cruz)  forty to a rock ten thousand back to my self morning I'll return Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
C T Posted November 25, 2013 forty to a rock ten thousand back to my self morning I'll return morning I'll return to that misty pine mountain ah, the fragrant air... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
soaring crane Posted November 27, 2013 Ah, the fragrant air caresses your skin so fair. Sunlight bathes your hair. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
C T Posted November 29, 2013 Ah, the fragrant air caresses your skin so fair. Sunlight bathes your hair. Sunlight bathes your hair and washes other parts too! long live the soap bar! Â https://www.google.com/search?q=sunlight+soap&espv=210&es_sm=91&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ei=5OOXUq3eHuG47Aazr4GAAw&ved=0CAkQ_AUoAQ&biw=1422&bih=668&dpr=0.9 2 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lemon_Squeezy Posted December 1, 2013 Long live the soap bar! The place is cleaned out fridays I don't want no scrubs Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
C T Posted December 2, 2013 Long live the soap bar! The place is cleaned out fridays I don't want no scrubs i don't want no scrubs but i can do the Samba Rio de Janeiro! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
soaring crane Posted December 2, 2013 *Rio de Janeiro! Let's have a Samba Pa Ti! Carlos Santana     *6 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Brian Posted December 3, 2013 Carlos Santana Oye como va, my friend Tito Puente rocked 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mark Foote Posted December 4, 2013 Carlos Santana Oye como va, my friend Tito Puente rocked  Tito Puente rocked all the lovers everywhere rolling out to sea Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
C T Posted December 4, 2013 Tito Puente rocked all the lovers everywhere rolling out to sea rolling out to sea a misguided sea urchin prickly to the touch... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
C T Posted December 4, 2013 rolling out to sea a misguided sea urchin prickly to the touch... prickly to the touch patting strictly at own risk cantankerous cat... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
soaring crane Posted December 4, 2013 (edited) Cantankerous cat Pusillanimous pussy Ferocious feline Edited December 4, 2013 by soaring crane Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rainbowvein Posted December 4, 2013 (edited) Cantankerous cat Pusillanimous pussy Ferocious feline  Ferocious feline Sharpens her canines on bone Savoring marrow Edited December 4, 2013 by rainbowvein Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
soaring crane Posted December 4, 2013 Savoring marrow After flushing it with Qi The secret of youth Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
C T Posted December 5, 2013 Savoring marrow After flushing it with Qi The secret of youth the secret of youth take two cold showers a day but don't wet your hair... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mark Foote Posted December 6, 2013 the secret of youth take two cold showers a day but don't wet your hair... Â but don't wet your hair don't slip a disk, dunkin' dough nuts a squirrel's friend Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mark Foote Posted December 6, 2013 (edited) but don't wet your hair don't slip a disk, dunkin' dough nuts a squirrel's friend  nuts a squirrel's friend winter, a squirrel's bed time me, I'm up all night  (writing loopy haiku) Edited December 6, 2013 by Mark Foote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
soaring crane Posted December 6, 2013 Me, I'm up all night You, you're standing in the light We, we're quite a sight Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mark Foote Posted December 8, 2013 Me, I'm up all night You, you're standing in the light We, we're quite a sight  We, we're quite a sight if it gets any better things could get real tight Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
