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A pebble is moved

My world is changed forever

I am new again

 

I am new again,

said the spider to the fly,

I'm hungry no more.

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I am new again,

said the spider to the fly,

I'm hungry no more.

 

I'm hungry no more.

My thirsting is gone forever.

Belching ecstasy.

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(skipping the belching part)

 

I'm hungry no more

on my old wooden table

the light of the moon

Edited by Little1

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Oops..sorry I just ignored that it was a chain and did my own thing :lol:

 

Ok..for the chain..

 

Each pass goes deeper

This inner labarynth of the mind cracked open

All is revealed within this golden treasure house

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One more try then!

 

Off we go again

This ocean of energy filling our bones

How long does this longing last?

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rofl mate !!! All good :)

 

Ahem...

 

First line 5 syllables

Second line 7 syllables

Third line 5 syllables

 

try again ... ;)

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:lol: 5, 7 ,5 dude :)

This golden treasure

Alchemy's distillation

Transforming new life

Off we go again :)

 

hey Cam get with the program - B)

yo bro ya missed mine too... wuzzupwidat?

Edited by Wayfarer64

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Sorry, just start it again. I stopped smoking yesterday and am getting a bit dizzy now. No more posting for a couple days. Wish me luck!!

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Good luck!

 

I'll just go with the five syllables of your last pre-quitting entry.

 

One more try then!

 

Off we go again

This ocean of energy filling our bones

How long does this longing last?

 

How long does this long

gracious neck have to carry

my short awkward thoughts?

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This golden treasure

Alchemy's distillation

Transforming new life

 

I'll go from here

 

Transforming new life

why not, Little One, enjoy

belching ecstasy?

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Good luck!

 

I'll just go with the five syllables of your last pre-quitting entry.

How long does this long

gracious neck have to carry

my short awkward thoughts?

 

 

niiiiiiiiiice.

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I yam what I yam

said pop eye the spinach man

I'm sailor pop eye!

 

 

 

sort of works at the end of the song if you drag out sai-lor ;)

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(all the haiku i ever read were about catching glimpses on nature, just so. get a load of how we, as westerners, transform it into a cry of subjectiveness. i will try to repare some of the harm done to the good name of haiku :lol: )

 

 

What is the difference

Old man on the shore quiet

His eyes are silent

 

 

:rolleyes:

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