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QUOTE(soaring crane @ Dec 19 2009, 10:45 PM)

 

Ever evolving

Yet some things remain sacred

It's five, seven, five

 

(sorry, bedtime here, lol - but then, I guess "every" can be counted as two or three - I counted two ;) )

 

 

 

Perhaps "ev'ry" then? Problem solved ;)

Have a good night..

 

 

It's five, seven, five

perhaps "ev'ry" problem solv-

ed have a good night

 

so, whose ed? to whom? :lol:

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ed have a good night

sleep tight joe and mary lou

Y'all come back now hear!

Y'all come back now hear!

Aft Christmas... or aft lifetimes

we shall meet again..

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Y'all come back now hear!

Aft Christmas... or aft lifetimes

we shall meet again..

 

 

we shall meet again...

even though we never met

like water and fire.

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we shall meet again...

even though we never met

like water and fire.

 

like water and fire

now or then "never long gone"

a poet once said..

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like water and fire

now or then "never long gone"

a poet once said..

a poet once said..

"I knew him Horatio"

Of jest and fancy.

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like water and fire

now or then "never long gone"

a poet once said..

 

 

ATTN:This is a return to a previous post.

 

 

'a poet once said'...

lets not think about that now!-

new blossoms at dawn...

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ATTN:This is a return to a previous post.

'a poet once said'...

lets not think about that now!-

new blossoms at dawn...

 

new blossoms at dawn

climbing vines up chain link fence

and favourite post

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new blossoms at dawn

climbing vines up chain link fence

and favourite post

and favorite post

grandma kept in her drawer

for thirty-eight years..

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and favorite post

grandma kept in her drawer

for thirty-eight years..

 

 

 

For thirty-eight years

I studied the mind with mind-

Snow on Everest.

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For thirty-eight years

I studied the mind with mind-

Snow on Everest.

 

snow on everest

or snow on the roof indeed

now worlds within worlds

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now worlds within worlds

confusing complex structure

yet only Tao prevails

 

 

 

Only Tao prevails:

watching my book collection.

taken by the fire

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Only Tao prevails:

watching my book collection.

taken by the fire

taken by the fire

that burns thru' all desires..

behold! a diamond!!

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Behold a diamond

The elder said to me, but

All I saw was shit

All i saw was shit

'cos the forest was barren

unfertilized muck..

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unfertilized muck...

turn in some rich compost and

sow the seeds of life.

 

 

sow the seeds of life

in every word and deed

breath expands the world

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sow the seeds of life

in every word and deed

breath expands the world

breath expands the world

while the abdomen contracts

the nature of things..

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breath expands the world

while the abdomen contracts

the nature of things..

 

 

the nature of things

sense patterns, build energies

lay'r patterns, reflect

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the nature of things

sense patterns, build energies

lay'r patterns, reflect

[a/quote]

 

lay'r patterns. reflect

on all energy, what now?

there! rain on the roof...

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"I" am left behind...

To ponder my existence

In the emptiness

 

 

 

In the emptiness,

the foot trusts the pavement walked,

something propels it.

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In the emptiness,

the foot trusts the pavement walked,

something propels it.

 

 

Welcome Sarnyn to The Tao Bums and the Haiku Chain! :D

 

...as a chain, we must take the last line of the immediately previous haiku as our first line in ours

and, as you have, stick to the 5-7-5 three line structure, just for the fun of it...

 

So, I respectfully offer this patching haiku...

 

there! rain on the roof...

wet pavements reflect the foot

something propels it

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something propels it

a little bit here and there

north, south, east and west..

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something propels it

a little bit here and there

north, south, east and west..

 

 

north, south, east and west...?

I know where I am going

its just slipped my mind.

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