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fleeting, disappears

where goes the willow-the-whisp?

I chase through the trees

 

 

I chase through the trees

drawn by faint aroma's thrill

...tantalising quest...

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thrill quest through the trees

disappears in the willow

drawn, where goes the whisp...

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thrill quest through the trees

disappears in the willow

drawn, where goes the whisp...

 

 

Hi winpro07. Inspired reshuffle of the two previous posts! :D The Haiku Chain idea is that you are constrained by having to take the last line of the previous post as your first line...

 

 

How about:

 

tantalising quest

disappears in the willow

drawn, where goes the whisp...

 

or

 

tantalising quest

thrill disappears in willow

drawn, where goes the whisp...

 

? :rolleyes:

 

Looking forward to more of yours

 

artform

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Hi winpro07. Inspired reshuffle of the two previous posts! :D The Haiku Chain idea is that you are constrained by having to take the last line of the previous post as your first line...

How about:

 

tantalising quest

disappears in the willow

drawn, where goes the whisp...

 

or

 

tantalising quest

thrill disappears in willow

drawn, where goes the whisp...

 

? :rolleyes:

 

Looking forward to more of yours

 

artform

:D

 

I'll take it from there...

 

drawn, where goes the whisp...

leading us deeper onwards

I wonder where to?

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:D

 

I'll take it from there...

 

drawn, where goes the whisp...

leading us deeper onwards

I wonder where to?

 

 

I wonder where to?

Hmm?Have i been here before?

Been gone Way to long!

 

 

:huh:

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I wonder where to?

Hmm?Have i been here before?

Been gone Way to long!

:huh:

 

Been gone Way to long!

And we all welcome you back!

Hip! Hip! and Horray!!!

 

:D

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Been gone Way to long!

And we all welcome you back!

Hip! Hip! and Horray!!!

 

:D

 

 

hip! hip! and horray!!!

arrived at the obvious

intuitively

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hip! hip! and horray!!!

arrived at the obvious

intuitively

 

 

intuitively

opening to energies

rising up and fly

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rising up and fly

remembering a master

who embraced the moon

who embraced the moon

whilst standing on the mountain

all around stillness

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who embraced the moon

whilst standing on the mountain

all around stillness

 

 

all around stillness

of a rare vintage is born

poetry seasoned

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all around stillness

of a rare vintage is born

poetry seasoned

 

 

poetry seasoned

and in reflection seeking

quality within

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poetry seasoned

and in reflection seeking

quality within

 

 

quality within

the reflection of the moon

found in deep waters

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quality within

the reflection of the moon

found in deep waters

 

 

found in deep waters

sleep thoughts travel well into

the stillness of time

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found in deep waters

sleep thoughts travel well into

the stillness of time

 

 

the stillness of time

self moving through infinite

silent dimension

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the stillness of time

self moving through infinite

silent dimension

 

 

silent dimension

outward, always outward as

silent men see on

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silent dimension

outward, always outward as

silent men see on

 

 

artform - neat.

 

silent men see on

sometimes with perfect mantra

silently chanting

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artform - neat.

 

silent men see on

sometimes with perfect mantra

silently chanting

 

 

silently chanting

hearing only the raven

mountaintop retreat

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silently chanting

hearing only the raven

mountaintop retreat

 

mountain top retreat

will rest of mountain follow?

low clouds will be missed.

 

(missed=mist ha! ha!)

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mountain top retreat

will rest of mountain follow?

low clouds will be missed.

 

(missed=mist ha! ha!)

 

Low clouds will be mist

Following way of water

i am energized

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Low clouds will be mist

Following way of water

i am energized

i am energized

after some groovy taiji

soar through the heavens

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i am energized

after some groovy taiji

soar through the heavens

 

 

soar through the heavens

a hot burning ball of gas

lots here on earth too.

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soar through the heavens

a hot burning ball of gas

lots here on earth too.

 

 

lots here on earth too

stake them out and lay a claim

then rent out heaven.

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lots here on earth too

stake them out and lay a claim

then rent out heaven.

 

then rent out heaven

harps, halos and wings galore

where's the fireworks?

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then rent out heaven

harps, halos and wings galore

where's the fireworks?

 

where's the fireworks?

well I keep them in my pants

those Chinese crackers!

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