Capital Posted November 9, 2009 Is this formal? I must ask, because you use a lot of 'I's throughout, and the first person usually is not allowed in formal English. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Marblehead Posted November 9, 2009 Capital's point being made, and based on my lack of knowledge of the other readings, I think it is a good start on a really good paper. Drive on! Â Peace & Love! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Iyoiyo Posted November 10, 2009 You're both right about the "I," but I detest that convention. Thanks for the input though. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Capital Posted November 10, 2009 Unfortunately, I am unable to judge other than basic convention, as I have never read that book. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
